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You need to put a lot more detail in here to secure a Merit. I gave you feedback on your interim marking (you have photocopied) and you need to act on this.
ReplyDeleteYou need to:
- If this is school campus then you need to refer more closely to safety protocol documents that you have read to prove that you have researched. We have covered this in class. You can refer to them and quote them.
- You have access to the school fire policy and the Handsam risk assessment which has a section on topics which you are mentioning here
- You should also refer to which staff are first aid trained nearby that location and whether they are trained in the areas that would be helpful in some of your rows (you can research the courses they went on online).
- This document should be jam packed with info and if in doors, the fire row should be pretty full
- Bullet points in the rows is fine
Please see me after school about this. This, as well as Budget Table, are the hardest documents and you need to get them right.